Friday, 3 September 2010

INN OF HAPPINESS THE FINALE PART 15


INN OF HAPPINESS THE FINALE
The drive was hot and humid
Chalky was warned what to expect
Told that there could be danger
With people who hold no respect.
One and a half hours later

They arrived at the desolate place
From outside of the building
There didn't seem a trace.

More dilapidated than the last visit
The building looked morose
Past its very best for years
Almost lost in comatose.

Demetrius knew exactly were
The room was at the back
The familiarity of inside
Was keeping him on track.

Chalky followed slowly behind
Demetrius heard his fear
His heart was beating faster
He wished he wasn't here.

Only the sounds of the building
Made the situation more eerie
Demetrius knew this wasn't human
And was in no mood to query.

part 16 tomorrow

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