Monday, 17 May 2010

DAILY POEM "SEA MONSTER" GUESS THE MOVIE 11

The sea was icy cold
nothing looked alive
clouds were black as coal
could anything survive?

The boat was rocking gently
the sea just seemed so dead
the heat was non existent
wrapped in covers from the bed.

The trip was somewhat draining
food was mighty thin
the radio always crackled
blasting nothing but a din.


It was seven days ago
we last caught sight of him
at first it was a struggle
now it was looking grim.

A beast as fine as he was
ruled the waters deep
his menace was ruthless
all rewards he would reap.

Twenty folk died at his mercy
some as young as ten
he did not care for humanity
not now or even then.

Coldly he circled them 
uncaring, toying with life
his manners were impecible
his teeth as sharp as a knife.

When he went in for the kill
nothing could stop his plight
kicking ,screaming,punching
in the end no one had fight.

It was time for him to be hunted
no one was safe around here
people who lived after his visits
cowered in terror and fear.

Finally they caught up with him
the boat was slow in design
they hooked him with a gun
with explosives on a line.

Fear had struck the people
but at last he was destroyed
but for the ones who had perished
it was sad, but no one could avoid.


Guess the movie time again folks, I think this is easy, but then I wrote it lol, go on give it a try, as usual all CORRECT entries will not be posted till the end of the night my time..GOOD LUCK :)



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21 comments:

  1. You write so well, William but I cannot guess this...
    does it start with a Pri...something...aiks...
    Have you a Great week!
    hugs
    shakira

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  2. i dunno, but i want to see it...my initial though would be something like JAWS...

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  3. Oh it is Perfect Storm?

    Have a great Monday..

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  4. I have no clue,
    Best Wishes for everyone else who r doing it!

    beautiful poem,
    Happy Monday!

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  5. Cant guess the movie but the poem is a masterpiece as always.

    felt a little sad for the monster :(

    trisha

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  6. Deep Blue Sea?

    Nice description.
    :)

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  7. @Amy

    awe sorry dear, but thanks for trying xx

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  8. @Anonymous
    trisha thanks for your visit xx

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  9. Is it Jaws? It's been so long, I can barely remember . . .

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  10. I am not a movie buff~ have no clue~ but always enjoy your writing.

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  11. hi william, thanks for the great poem, I'm not sure about the movie.Is it lake placid? look forward to the answer.

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  12. @Brian Miller
    WELL DONE BRIAN U DID IT AGAIN :)

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  13. Billy, it is too late to answer, but as you know I have to take care of Larry and I only get a few mintues a day on the computer. Your poem is excellent and leaves one amazed. I would have said "Jaws" if I got here soon enough. LOL

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  14. Wow!! even the pic is awesome William.

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  15. Well darn another one I haven't seen. Rick knew what it was :)

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  16. I am very late guessing. Wonderful poem, my guess would have been right,. Jaws, That movie scared me..
    "Coldly he circled them
    uncaring, toying with life"

    You did a great job sending out the panic feeling.
    Gerardine xx

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