Thursday, 15 April 2010

DAILY POEM "WITHOUT YOU"




Without YOU life is empty
without  YOU life is bleak
without  YOU the sun isn't shining
without  YOU I cannot speak.

Without YOU I get lonely
without  YOU I get sad
without  YOU I go crazy
without  YOU I go mad.

Without YOU I lose all interest
without  YOU I do not care
without  YOU I reach for the bottle
without  YOU we are not a pair.


Without YOU I rarely get up
without  YOU I do not eat
without  YOU I speak to no one
without  YOU my heart don't beat.

Without YOU its always raining
without  YOU the thunder roars
without  YOU the birds aint singing
without  YOU I am behind doors.

Without YOU the melody is tuneless
without  YOU my poems don't rhyme
without  YOU the movie is boring
without  YOU there is no time.

Without YOU my heart stops beating
without  YOU there is much pain
without  YOU the flowers stop blooming
without  YOU I am under a strain.

Without YOU there is no reason
without  YOU what is the point?
without  YOU there is no logic
without  YOU God won't annoint.

Without YOU I cannot breathe
without  YOU I cannot survive
without  YOU I cannot forget
without  YOU I can't be alive.

Without You...................

Being in love is the most beautiful thing in the World, the feelings, the magic, its all there, but when that goes, through some reason or another, it makes you feel like the above, it has happened to us all at one point in our lives.

Can you relate to the above? do YOU think some or all of the above is how you would feel if you lost your partner, or vice versa..?


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33 comments:

  1. willia, i can not even imagine life without my wife...whew. tought to even think about, but i can so relate to the poem...

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  3. a lovely poem , william, well delievered.

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  4. thanks very much friend :)

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  5. this post means the world today for me.. Something personal happened to me.. If you would like more just e-mail me William. But it just makes you think and love more than you can.. Have a great day.. Awards are up if you want to grab any. I know you may already have some of them. I just love your blog..

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  6. of course,
    I have those moment at some point of life,
    it feels exciting,
    but it hurts also,
    you have captured the feelings beautifully.

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  7. amazing changes in your blog,
    I do like new and fresh look,
    thank you for the fun!

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  8. This one has me thinking of all of my friends/family who have lost someone they thought they could not live without. It is a big adjustment. I see the sadness and anguish. I get sad myself. We need to love when we can, right? :)

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  9. Beautiful William and yes unfortunately we all feel that emptiness when someone we love is gone!

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  10. thank you Ji xxx

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  11. absolutley dear xxx

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  12. awe thanks Cindy :)

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  13. First of all, wanna say sorry for not getting here every day! My Twitter stream moves so fast these days that I can't keep up! I will subscribe right now!

    This is another really good poem that pretty much everyone can understand. Those feelings are SO hard to get through. :(

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  14. Thanks a lot Karen, I appreciate we all get busy, especially when writing lol, thanks for coming over and welcome back xx)

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  15. You are welcome.. Is this your main e-mail? Or do others read this
    response...

    ~Amy

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    wish you a happy Thursday!

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  17. Oh yea William we've all been there,I enjoyed your poem today :)
    Luv ya Flower

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  18. Finally got to sign in whew!! Lovely poem William,yes we've all been in that hard place.I really enjoyed the read,have a good day.
    Luv ya

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  19. absolutely mate, thanks :)

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  20. awe how kind, have gotten most of them from Jingle, but I am so honoured xxx

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  21. thanks hon, will collect soon, u are too good to us xxx

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  22. thanks Birthday girl xxxx

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  23. "Without YOU I cannot breathe
    without YOU I cannot survive
    without YOU I cannot forget
    without YOU I can't be alive."

    Wonderfully written. Your poems touch my heart!

    Gerardine xx

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  24. Ask me this when rick is back at work ... lol :) Most the times yes, just too much together time right now :)

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  25. I don't know what I would do without Larry.

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  26. I don't think it is still working.

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  27. Love is very powerful and is such an essential part of our being. To lose it is like losing a part of ourselves, we no longer are able to function as we did. You totally captured the impact of lost love.

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  28. awe thanks Gerardine xx

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  29. hahhaha classic xx

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  30. vi its working a treat babe xxx

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  31. thanks babe xxx

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  32. thanks again flower xx

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