Thursday, 18 February 2010

DAILY POEM "NEVER TO RETURN"


You capture my very soul
only in dreams I feel you
touching my body,
you envelope me in warmth
its almost a fantasy.
Your hair is like silk
soft, curly, flowing
with the scirroco wind
behind you.
What I miss is your tender touch
so soft it feels as if
you are stroking me 
from another dimension.
Before you went away
my life was full
and complete
you made the very structure
of my existence
you saturated me with love
and tenderness.
As I glance at your smiling face
on a picture deep beneath
my pillow surrounded
by your moreish scent.
you went away
never to return
my life is saddened
never to return
you went away.

The path of true love does not run smooth, awe, shame...LOL.

Are YOU in love? how do you feel?

POSTED FOR JINGLES THURSDAY RALLY, LOVE YOU JINGLE XX

24 comments:

  1. i am a fan of your poems, william... truly amazing work.. :)

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  2. very nice william...it is often bumpy...even after you find it, if you have a fully engaged relationship...but to be in it is to feel complete.

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  3. Dearest William,

    This is SO FANTABULOUS!
    Oh to be in love and to lost love,
    or is it lust now?

    I think if we are truly honest with ourselves,
    we cannot fall in love without our consent,
    hence I always believe that
    LOVE is not to be taken lightly,
    is to be nurtured and cultivated.

    hugs
    shakira

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  4. when it comes to love, u r extraordinary!

    100% fabulous job!

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  5. Please let me know who u r going to nominate for

    Perfect Poet Award of Week 6.
    Remember your Rally Perfect Award for week 5.
    U can simply comment in my blog to let me know..

    thanks a million!

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  6. aaahhhh.... loved it..
    superb poem... and a perfect pic to go with it...
    good flow of words and yes She is described really superbly :)

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  7. Thanks for stopping by the past two days. Sorry my little one is sick and who knows if I will get it. Tomorrow is "Family Fridays" I host my Round Robin once a month and that will be on March 12. So for tomorrow it is Family Fridays and you can write a poem about families. I will host this with my friend every Friday but not on my Friday's I host Round Robin.

    You ask are you in love?
    I would have to say yes.. My husband is one of the people I love. I fell in love with him and go deeper every day. He is such a kind soul and I am glad we have each other.

    I also have fallen in love with my little girl. The day I found out I was having her and then seeing her big brown eyes when she came into this world.

    I love many people and things.. Love is so powerful..

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  8. You have created something truly beautiful!

    Poignant poem....

    Best wishes

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  9. I have been married for 25 years to the same guy! He amazes me on a daily basis. :) It is wonderful when we find love that is here to stay. I wish everyone that magic! :) Have a great day!

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  10. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/02/18/the-spot-light-award-and-more/

    an award 4 your love,
    got to love u back!
    smiles!

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  11. This is really good! I enjoyed reading it

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  12. That's a great poem. Being in love is a very strong emotion to feel and I'm lucky, because I am.

    CJ xx

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  13. Your poem reminds me of "Nevermore" by Edgar Poe.

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  14. Thank you for stopping by today. william,
    You're one of those lovely people. I hope you know that. :)

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  15. i keep away from love as much as possible.
    its a beautiful thing.
    but potentially destuctve.
    And definately counter productive. lol
    .
    Cool poem william

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  16. thank u for the comments in my blog.

    love is cool,
    but when one gets hurt or abandoned, it is heart breaking..

    well, humans are strong animals, we still feel passionate about love...
    it is great to love and get loved.

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  17. I'm very much in love. This is my 2nd marriage and I have to say this time it feels real instead of just playing house :) BTW, I was married 21 years the first time lol I know that's a LOOONG time to play house but we did.

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  18. In fact, I AM in love, and I know it well. Funny you should ask...because this is for you :)

    http://drj3kyll.wordpress.com/2010/02/18/melodic-ostentation-flavors-for-friends/

    /hugs
    The "Good" Doctor

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  19. Lovely Post William....I liked it a lot.

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  20. Award 4 u on my blog...plz accept it
    http://viewsandrasworld.wordpress.com/2010/02/19/happy-award/

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  21. hello, william... i am giving you this (though you may already have this)... im sure it would be so nice to be friends with you here in the blogging world... :)

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  22. I love this...so romantic...so sensual...
    Thanks for sharing!

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  23. Beautiful and sad. I try to not dwell on what I would feel like if I could never again touch my husband, but I think you have captured my feelings with your poem. Touching.

    -Suze

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