Sunday, 27 December 2009

DAILY POEM "IMAGINARY FRIEND"

Tanya sat at the elegant tree
leaves surrounding her like a fence
she looks over yonder smiling to herself
nothing sinister but something intense!

A lonely child in an adults world
no brothers or sisters around
except for the squirrel climbing his tree
there wasn't as much as a sound.

Winds gathered strongly, blowing the leaves
was like some kind of storm in the yard
the branches were waving as if they were real
all twisted, limp and retard.

Tanya never moved she loved the wind
her hair was flowing all around her head
for her the excitment was nourishing
it was like she was stuck just like lead.

For hours on end she sat at the tree
nothing mattered no one would know
rooted to the ground like her powerful Elm
possibly she may even grow!

For years on end she sat and stared
to something just passed the old tree
murmuring words softly spoken
for Tanya thats how she was free.


KIDS HAVE IMAGINATIONS, SO WHY CAN'T WE LOL......

picture courtesy of google....

2 comments:

  1. Tanya is alone,
    she has no cell phone,
    she has No friends or family to own,
    But, her story forms a lovely song..

    You have told the story very relaxingly.
    "squirrels climbing his tree" is my favorite part, I can see the WORDS match the "images" precisely and perfectly!
    A job excellently done!

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  2. Well my friend, when it comes to imaginations, I don't think I have ever grew out of mine. LOL Everyone tells me that I have one of the biggest imaginations they have ever known anyone to have. Your poem is wonderful my friend. Just plain awesome and fun to read.

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