Tuesday, 22 December 2009

DAILY POEM "CHRISTMAS FEELING"

Kids faces fixed to a permanent smile
tinsel blowing in the air
even the smell of everything around us
makes it all like a Christmas fair.


Decorations hanging from shops in Town
lights turning rhythmically bright
Santas head bobbing up and down
with elves around him alight.

Its not just the presents that make this day
its been tradition for thousands of years
it all comes together in timely precision
watchin pop as he downs all the beers.

A table with finery right down to the names
with each person having their special place
Christmas candles burning amid napkins and glasses
you can see the pride over mums face.

When the day is over, the kids out cold
for the adults its time to relax
everyone full to the brim with food
as the old indigestion attacks.

Christmas day is over Happy birthday Jesus
your birth made this all that it is
and for Generations to come, perhaps eternity
Christmas will come with a "whizz"

4 comments:

  1. you have set everyone in mood,
    with your prescribed delicious food,
    and a sparking Christmas tree in your neighborhood,
    Jesus, birthday, everything is understaood
    ...

    Thank you for a rocking poem!
    Best!

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  2. What a wonderful poem this is Billy. I have been baking cookies all day and this poem put me even more in the Christmas Spirit. I bet you know what my favorite line is. Yes, you are right. "Christmas day is over Happy birthday Jesus your birth made this all that it is and for Generations to come, perhaps eternity Christmas will come with a whizz". Love that part my friend.

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  3. I don’t know if in Scotland, “a whizz” means what I took it as. Because with that last word I laughed! This is a very sweet Christmas poem. It made me feel happy!

    Favorite line:
    “Its not just the presents that make this day”

    Thank you for this wonderful poem.
    Gerardine Baugh

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  4. YES JESUS IS THE REASON FOR THE SEASON AND YOUR
    POEM GIVE HIM ALL THE GLORY, HOPE U HADE A VERY MERRY CHRISTMAS, LOVE, MAR AND LES

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